*scroll down for a YouTube video*
Make sense, make sense of scariness by structure
Journalize the fear
So I mind-say Dear Diary:
We know each other
On the strength of our poetry
Generously offering me
A place to stay, words of comfort
On this horrible day
Invitations arrive from
Friends and family
In overwhelming kindness
Yet, I cannot see bringing
Three dogs with me
Hours before Irma comes ashore
Heading for the motel
Driving down deserted Main Street
Might be the coming of
The Zombie Apocalypse
But it is merely a Category 5 Hurricane
Settled in sanctuary
Dogs dreaming on strange beds
Tapping my tablet
Social media taking away
The dread of loneliness
People care, even if we never met
So as I sweat
In a hotel without electricity
I think about the positives
Of Facebook, WordPress and Twitter
Dogs need trees
To lift their legs
So in the dark we walk
Incessant rain jabs the skin
Like plucking a splinter
With a pin
And as the wind becomes wilder
A cold, preternatural sensation
Lifts my curly hair above the nape
Twenty-four hours after
Prime bands from Irma
Begin to dissipate
A half rainbow appears
Been too many years
Since I believed that
Rainbows are a sign of happiness
And love to come, staying forever
Whether we go over or under it
But I ask for health and strength anyway
Always wise
To compromise
Never burn your bridges
Believe until the end
For we never know
Trepidationally driving home
Wondering if a Live Oak fell
Onto my tin trailer roof
Or if a long-term power outage
Renders my water well pump fruitless
My air conditioner within silent reach
Streets blocked by fallen trees
Flooded with muddied water
No humans seen in this continuing cataclysm
Will all end in anarchy
Without electricity?
But oh, as I bump along my dirt road
Pull into the marshy drive
Delicate banana trees broken at the spine
I see a beautiful sight
On! On! The outside light!
So grateful because I know
Many people lost their lives
Lost their homes
Maybe even lost their faith
In the battering wind and rain
This time, I received a gift
Thank you, thank you, thank you…
© 2017 Clarissa Simmens (ViataMaja)
IMAGE: Hurricane Irma, Naples, FL (cnn.com)
*YouTube video: Scorpions, Rock You Like A Hurricane https://youtu.be/Ypq1FsSXdbE
You have captured in words what we have heard our families exclaim. Great one Clarissa.
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Thanks! All the little life annoyances become silly in the face of a natural disaster. Glad for safety, this time…
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Amen. Puts things in perspective doesn’t it.
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I’m so glad you and your doggies are safe, are at home, and have ELECTRICITY! That’s something we don’t appreciate s much until we lose it.
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Thanks, Cathy! I have a few friends who have been told that there will not be any power for 10 more days! It seems so wrong in this age of technology…
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I know…
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I’ve read both poems a couple of times to see the difference, both enjoyable. For me, the earlier work moves through a fascinating story. This work is more expansive, and as well as the story, more universal threads woven. “Dogs dreaming on strange beds…” and “Always wise to compromise…” work really well. But then there’s “Baba Jaga” and “twin Aries vital force.” Mmm, time to stop typing. 🙂 I conclude they are different. 😜
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Oh, wow, Steve, no! no! don’t stop! Thanks so much for your comments and comparison. I, too, respond to certain sentences that can make a poem. Going to catch up on your words and others that I have missed for the last week 🙂
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I’m glad you’re okay, Clarissa. And your home as well. 😊
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Thanks so much, David! Seems we have another one coming but I’m off for my annual visit to Philly next week (if the trains are running)…
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It doesn’t look like the next one is heading your way, but I wish you luck all the same.
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